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Query Letter
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TESTIMONIALS

“Working with C.C.  has completely transformed my approach to my own work. She has a rare talent for seeing a story from a bird’s eye view and reconstructing the existing pieces into their most effective positions, so that my work shines more brightly. She digs deep in the pursuit of clarity and emotional resonance, forcing me to reflect on my own understanding of my plot and characters. Every time we work together, I walk away a better editor of my own work myself. I trust her completely, and often find myself returning to her notes.

If you want to collaborate with an editing genius whose understanding of storytelling reaches past syntax alone and hits the very bone and sinew of your work, then Carly is a no-brainer. Hire her.”

— Ruth Mckell, author of HONEY IN HER VEINS (Little Brown, 2026)

“When it comes to queries, C.C. is a wizard! She has a way of seeing the true heart of a story and pulling all of the important threads together to craft a concise, well-crafted query. After a few months in the query trenches without much feedback, C.C. helped me rework my query and immediately it felt so much stronger. I went on to receive multiple full requests and an agent offer!”

— Kayley Jackson, author of A WAY WITH WORDS